blog 12

 Looking back to when i started this class. Concentrating to write a essay or plan one out was really frustrating. I would get distracted with anything maybe cause of my weak planning technique I had for essays. I believe I have improve but still need much more improvement. With the practice Cat that we have taken in class it has help time me and think much faster to write. Maybe i feel more comfartable now doing essays. Before I used to get stock on the first sentence my brain would stop and nothing, zero ideas of how and of what I should write the essay would dissapear. But know thanks to the classes and stuff I have learned like how to plan and essay step by step it has help me alot. I Know have to practice more on my grammar  and of using better words to describe what  I want ot say so that the reader would understand better. Also my thesis has to improve more. I want to go straight and clear on my claim. But everything step by step no need to rush. I have taken the first step on planning now I going to work harder on writing an good essay. Understandable for the readers. This blogs has also been a good help on my development. Also using the blogger online has been a creat experience. Well maybe cause it has been the first time i use a blog.  Reading other classmates essays has help me more on what to write. I would trully see my improvement when I take the CAT. Until that time comes I would practice more for a better grade.